damn, what is this?!
i fell to this crappy pond with fishies.
i don't like fishies, they make me sick
and not because i'm a racist or something
it's just that we don't have anything in common
and they crowd my space without any consideration
damn. get away fish.. get away.
why do i find myself here in the first place?
donno.. went out with this fly bi-chick [not an actual fly... freaks!]
we got things heating up and then i wake up here .. wtf ?
ok... so i better make the best of this thing
and make myself the king of this fishpond
after all... i got the verbal skillz that surpass
all others.
hm. you wanted a comment here, so. yeah. came here to comment on it now.
yes. no advanced crit from me as i have no clue bout poetry. i read some and like it, and i read others and it does nothing. this is one of the second kind... which is why i didn't comment right away... but as you ask for my opinion...
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booyaka fishpond © 1983 ~SubwayCulture
yes. no advanced crit from me as i have no clue bout poetry. i read some and like it, and i read others and it does nothing. this is one of the second kind... which is why i didn't comment right away... but as you ask for my opinion...
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.:: our scars have the power to remind us that the past was real ::.
you can just say it didn't work for you.
have a nice day
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booyaka fishpond © 1983 ~SubwayCulture
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In the begining God created the Four String Bass. Where did the fifth string come from?
it's about a state of mind.. to become educated
and rise above the bullshit.
booyaka!!!! ... lol
thanks for the comment
SubwayCulture
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booyaka fishpond © 1983 ~SubwayCulture
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In the begining God created the Four String Bass. Where did the fifth string come from?
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booyaka fishpond © 1983 ~SubwayCulture
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