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©2006-2009 ~SubwayCulture
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damn, what is this?!
i fell to this crappy pond with fishies.

i don't like fishies, they make me sick
and not because i'm a racist or something
it's just that we don't have anything in common
and they crowd my space without any consideration

damn. get away fish.. get away.

why do i find myself here in the first place?
donno.. went out with this fly bi-chick [not an actual fly... freaks!]
we got things heating up and then i wake up here .. wtf ?

ok... so i better make the best of this thing
and make myself the king of this fishpond
after all... i got the verbal skillz that surpass
all others.

booyaka fishpond!

... booyaka :nod:

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:iconchiachrome:
i think i'd have said "damn, get away..." instead of "shit." other than that i like it. ^_^
:iconpyromanin:
hm. you wanted a comment here, so. yeah. came here to comment on it now.

yes. no advanced crit from me as i have no clue bout poetry. i read some and like it, and i read others and it does nothing. this is one of the second kind... which is why i didn't comment right away... but as you ask for my opinion... :)

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.:: our scars have the power to remind us that the past was real ::.
:iconsubwayculture:
thank you. no need for long stories
you can just say it didn't work for you.

have a nice day

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booyaka fishpond © 1983 ~SubwayCulture
:iconspikmonkeyman:
but what if i wanna be king of the fish pond?

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In the begining God created the Four String Bass. Where did the fifth string come from?
:iconsubwayculture:
it's not about me in person.. it can be anybody
it's about a state of mind.. to become educated
and rise above the bullshit.

booyaka!!!! ... lol

thanks for the comment
SubwayCulture

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booyaka fishpond © 1983 ~SubwayCulture
:iconspikmonkeyman:
I'm for standing about the bullshit. i'm working twords becoming a Cultural Ambassador for UNDA so that all people get representation.

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In the begining God created the Four String Bass. Where did the fifth string come from?
:iconspikmonkeyman:
thank you kind sir

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Proud Cultural Ambasador for ~UnitedNations, because its your World

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